January 15, 2011
11:40 am
I Felt Ecstasy
My dream broke
It was Saturday, and raining
And for no reason. I felt ecstasy
Even though my foot was paining
I checked the phone
A new text that said,
"Hurry outside and see
The weather as beautiful
As it can be "
So I did as it said
And jumped out from my bed
I rushed outside
And to my delight
I saw heaven
In front of my eyes
Cool air, beautiful rain
Thundering sky, gigantic clouds,
Scattered leaved, gold and yellow
Just the sight of this
And my heart started leaping
And I saw all of this
When the world was snugly sleeping
Every piece in that jigsaw
At the right place, perfectly fit
It was then that I felt ecstasy
So picture-perfect, isn’t it ?? J
hOw do you write such such beautiful poems...can't help reading it again n again....i wonder about your progressions with your upcoming famous book after 2 yrs..?
ReplyDeleteomigosh Barwal,
ReplyDeletei didn't expect you to like it so much, nah, it wasn't so good a poem....
but anyways you liked it, and this means a lot to me,,,, thankx....
nice work, didi !!!!!!!
ReplyDeletemay not be dat good for high-classed poetesses like u dido...but the poem seems very nice to me..cz it's somehow related to me n my surroundings... :)..
ReplyDelete@bhavesh learn sumthng frm ur genius dido
THanks, it means a lot to me,
ReplyDeletebhavesh, hmmmm listen to vidisha atleast,okay ? ;)
gud work....keep it up!
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